Month: August 2023

Strengths:

1. Clear Understanding of Key Concepts on public health and global health topics

2. Critical Analysis in several areas, such as the implications of globalization on population health and the evaluation of the role of global health partnerships, NGOs, and pharmaceutical industries.

3. Effective Analysis of Diseases (NCDs) the feedback highlights a good analysis of disease conditions.

4. Good Acknowledgment of Collaborative Online International Learning (COIL) project. There is recognition of some good analysis of the COIL project, indicating an understanding of the contribution of global change and development to disease burdens.

Weaknesses:

1. Limited Depth of Analysis The feedback suggests that while there is a good grasp of the issues, there were missed opportunities to explore key areas in greater depth.

2. Reference Errors Some gaps and errors in referencing were identified, including missed citations and unsupported sections.

3. The conclusion was criticized for being not proper and generalized. This indicates a need for improvement in summarizing key findings and reinforcing the main points made in the analysis.

Opportunities:

1. The effective analysis has the opportunity to expand the analysis in key areas, addressing the noted weaknesses and exploring topics in greater depth.

2. Good Acknowledgment of Collaborative Online International Learning (COIL) project. Makes me to improve my collaborative skills to work with different work landscapes.

Threats:

1. The risk of Incomplete Analysis is a threat that if the analysis remains at a surface level, it may not fully meet the academic standards for in-depth exploration and critical evaluation.

2. Continued Reference Challenges gaps in referencing persist, it may affect the overall credibility and academic integrity of the work and decrease the quality of analysis in the topic